Saturday, May 26, 2012

.....   Of wants and dreams"  30th Nov2011 ....
Is it wrong to dream?
To try and catch the moonlit beam.
Is it wrong to to want to shine?
With no penny in pocket nor a dime?  ......
Copyright Madhavi Sood 2012

2 comments:

Vinay Phatak said...

simple. good. any particular reason to use "to" 2 times in line 3?

madhavi sood said...

Thanks @Vinay Phatak for liking my work. The 'to' repeated twice is a typing error, regretted.
Of wants and dreams" 30th Nov2011 ....
Is it wrong to dream?
To try and catch the moonlit beam.
Is it wrong to want to shine?
With no penny in pocket nor a dime? ......
Copyright Madhavi Sood 2012
Rectified and thanks for reading it so well.
Best Regards